[d at DCC] Editing of 2-TPMs/2-owners petition text...

[Bill]

On July 2, 2006 03:44 pm, Russell McOrmond wrote:
> THAT technical protection measures (TPMs) used by copyright
> holders have caused problems ranging from invasions of privacy,
> the disabling people from enjoying content on devices or software
> of our own choosing, to the high-profile circumvention of the
> security of thousands of computers by the Sony-BMG RootKit;

I suggest:

THAT technical protection measures (TPMs), as implemented by 
copyright holders, have caused problems such as invading end users 
privacy, preventing consumers from enjoying content on devices and 
software of their independent choice and the high-profile Sony-BMG 
RootKit fiasco which circumvented and compromised the security of 
thousands of computers.

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