[d@DCC] The petition

[Neil Leyton]

I really like these changes.
N.

mskala at ansuz.sooke.bc.ca wrote:

>On Fri, 16 Apr 2004, Chris Brand wrote:
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>>2. Whether the pleading should include "control of your own devices".
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>Yes, but not in that phrasing by any means.  Who's "you"?  I'd rather
>phrase the last sentence "We further call upon Parliament not to extend
>the term of copyright; and to recognise the right of citizens to
>personally control their own communication devices."  Note that in that
>phrasing I also moved "not to extend" first because otherwise it's an
>ambiguous sentence structure, and looks like we're calling on Parliament
>to recognize the right not to extend copyright.
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